Tonight I was in Leicester for the Funhouse gong show, courtesy of a car share. This is a very nice gig in a room that you’d never know was there, otherwise. Spiky Mike, the birthday boy, had lots of fun chatting to a family that had mother and daughter, both working as estate agents for differing companies and also to a building conservator. It was lovely to see Neal Sullivan present and as always, the votes were on 2 minutes, 3.30 and then the final one on the 5 minutes.
Hazel Donovan
I was looking forward to seeing how Donovan had improved. When I saw her last, the only thing that had let her down was her material, which had been too long in the set up and this had given the audience time to guess the reveals. Everything else had been fine. Tonight, she was massively improved in every way. She opened well, her reveals were well hidden, the construction was sound, with the callback being very well thought out, her material darker and more hard hitting. The Angela joke has a lot of potential. She’s definitely onto something with this, but the current wording isn’t getting the most out of it. Hazel was a well deserved runner up on the night.
Keith Miller
With his flowing Irish accent, Miller was very pleasant and easy to listen to. He made a strong start talking about his looks, there was a bit of a lull over mortgage, but minted was clever. He made the final, where he talked about his job and this was all pretty good, too. Miller did well, but requires better writing to go further.
Eddy Dibs
Dibs opened by talking about his height and this was all ok, albeit not especially strong. The identity of the heckler was a usual suspect, which weakened the joke and the shift to trains was a bit of a jump, which spoilt the flow of the set. Dibs was an early gonging.
Joel Webster
Webster’s set was one of the great what ifs of the night. He was very slow out of the blocks, being deliberately awkward looking on stage before going into an anti-comedy routine deconstructing what was occurring. He was voted off before this came to fruition. However, what if he’d opened with a couple of immediately funny remarks that had gained him enough good will to survive the first vote? It was obvious what he was trying to do and it was a clever idea, but the vote clock ran out too soon for him. His off the cuff remark on seeing the cards got a good laugh and that was nice. Ultimately what Webster was trying probably isn’t suited to a gong show, but over a ten, if he can get it to work, I think he’ll have some excellent intelligent comedy.
Niall O’Dwyer
I like O’Dwyer. He has some nice ideas, but as I always say, without more consistent stage time, he’s not going to be able to make the most of them and that’s a shame. Tonight he was doing some new material and as he’s a good writer, most of it was usable. Hobbies is sound and the callback worked out very well, even if he might have undersold the reveal a touch. Old friends is good, but if he edits it down for pacing, it will be even better. The swimming pool gag he used in the final was great.
Henning Nilsen
Nilsen’s performance was one of the standouts of the night and I was surprised that he didn’t win, considering that this worked on every level. His writing is rock solid, his delivery and timing spot on. There was nothing to find fault with here. Nilsen received consistent big laughs and was one of the strongest acts of the show. He came out 3rd in the voting.
Gary Leonardi
Leonardi had the hard task of following Nilsen and whilst his writing wasn’t bad, the set as a whole didn’t feel that cohesive, never really rising above the sum of its parts. It’s possible that a stronger delivery might have helped, but I think if he were to construct a set that felt more than individual jokes that could be told in almost any order, he’d do better.
Aaron Williams
Williams was a fast speaking act whose pace built up some momentum. He also got stronger the longer he was on stage. The highlight to his performance was the fun fair voices, which his ability to do a different voice helped to sell. His final minute was good, too.
Sonja Reddy
I feel as if Reddy has a wealth of possible material that she could use from her own life and it’s possible that this may work better than some of her writing, as amongst the good jokes in here, there are a few groaners. Tonight she was a bit unlucky in being thrown at one point and not really getting back into gear, but things like that are cured through experience. Reddy has got a good presence on stage, but really needs more stage time to develop as an act.
Jack King
King has promise, he’s always writing new material and trying out new ideas and when he develops a solid ten, he’ll do well. Tonight he opened with some audience interaction through the medium of So spake Zarathustra and this was both creative as well as attention grabbing. From here, King gave the room a selection of jokes, these were a bit hit and miss, not helped by hid pacing, which allowed a slight reset between each gag, rather than helping him build impetus. Asking the chap on the front row his kids first words resulted in a very funny audience comment and with more experience King would have been able to capitalise on that.
Fraser Ball
Ball has the makings of a good act. His every man persona and material would work in any room in the country. The religious material is great and tonight he didn’t put a foot wrong. His timing was spot on, he built up a lot of momentum and was great all of the way through. I was surprised that when it came to the voting he didn’t end up placing in the top three. Although it might not have happened tonight, it’s only a matter of time before he wins a show.
Dom Marshall
It had been a while since I last saw Marshall and he’s improving. The truth or dare material has promise, but could do with the wording tightening up to make it more punchy, as tonight he was voted off despite some of the audience really being onboard with what he was saying.
Phil Irving
Irving opened well with some room observations before going into material about his 2005 jokes. This was a nice idea, but to get the most from it, he could do with delivering a few examples of why some jokes no longer work, such as perhaps one about a celebrity who is now either not cool or is on a list, etc. These would help bring this bit to life. The school section was all pretty good and he made the final, where he massively mistimed the last minute, losing a final chance to shine.
Dragos Mostenescu
Mostenescu had a superb gig. He’s a musical comic and in the 5 minutes, plus the final, he gave the room differencing nations versions of Let it Be, prompting a singalong and then arms being waved in the air. His final 60 seconds built upon this good work. It’s hard to describe his set beyond this, as there weren’t any obvious gags, as such. It was all in his creativity and delivery, but this was a real crowd pleaser and he emerged as the winner of the contest. I’m looking forward to seeing more of Mostenescu as this was a most entertaining performance.